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I would love to be in your arms baby, just to feel your heart beating with mine, I wanna be one with you, skin to skin, nose to nose, pulse to blood pumping pulse, No one can boil my blood through my veins like you do, every time i hear you say "Pooh ii Love Yhu" my heart races faster than a bullet train, we are unstoppable, baby we make Romeo and Juliet look like a preschool romance, Puppy Love !!!! Let's dance, to the rhythmic beat of your souls music, swaying to the flow of your hearts beating drums, We are magic ! You are beautiful, gorgeous, Picture Perfect, Your Beautiful brown eyes, Slightly small but plump lips, Oh so sweet carmel skin tone, sandy brown hair with a hint of ginger highlights, & Smooth long gorgeous legs, You are my life line, as sunlight is to a Red Rose, my peddles would wither if your love was ever no more, if i had one wish, it would be a day && a life time with you, i would love && cherish you, Flaws && All, Days when you just wanna cry, my shoulder is your handkerchief, Come in tired and don't wanna cook, i'm Martha Stewart, That time of the month, When all you wanna do is pull your hair out, i'm your Advil, Stressed, Baby i'm your stress ball, And you ask, "Bae does this make me look fat", Never to lie to you i say, "Honey if i didn't know any better i would've mistaken you for Miss America!" My goal is to please you in every way possible, Never will the day come when you say "What happened to us" rather than "Baby the day i saw you i new you would be the one, we are untouchable!" Mrs. && Mrs.Undefined ! There will be definitions of our love, legendary stories of how we became bionic, We will rewrite the definition of Unconditional Love, Make big time romance stories look like children's bedtime books, Honey We Are love and all its wonders, WE DEFINE THE WORDS……

I LOVE YOU

Feedback From Max +Love the metaphors +Very well structured +while the metaphors were well written, some were a little cheesy.